English Original
heavy
rain
end
of the war
with
cardboard swords
Frogpond, 38:2,
Spring/Summer 2015
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
傾盆大雨
用紙板劍結束
戰爭
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
倾盆大雨
用纸板剑结束
战争
Comment:
Emotionally
speaking, the unexpected yet powerful last lines effectively makes a shift in
theme and mood, reminding me of one of my most cherished childhood memories.